A Rude Discussion

August 10, 2009
By mfenelon BRONZE, Nyc, New York
mfenelon BRONZE, Nyc, New York
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I looked into his eyes
Told him to tell me no lies
It was then
I began to ask
Questions
Because I loved him and I wanted our relationship to last
I held his hands and looked through his sole
Then I asked do you think I am beautiful
Looking back at me, he said no
To this response I kept the emotions inside that I did not want to show
Gaining my strength because I know I’m strong, I acted as if nothing went wrong
Piercing through his eyes I said do you really like me
The response was the same
And I felt like I was the only person left to blame
Preventing my voice from cracking, I cleared my mind by asking
If I ended the relationship today
Would you cry, would you cry for me to stay
He stood up and said no, no baby I won’t
That was it; I could not take it anymore
So I ran right out the door
To my surprise, he ran after me
But I told him to go, leave me alone
I told him I did not love him
And that’s when he grabbed my hand
He looked through my swollen eyes
Then he said I don’t think you’re beautiful, I think you’re beyond it
Then he continued saying
I don’t really like you, I love you
And if you ended our relationship this way
I won’t cry but die for you



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Keasbey GOLD said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 4:02 pm
Keasbey GOLD, La Habra Heights, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who's left me so many times. I will no longer pray on my knees, to a god who won't answer my call."

holy hell ...thats amazing....absolutely amazing.




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