♥♥they were so young!!!!♥♥

y god?
y did you have to take them away from me?
what did i do to deserve this?
i loved them more
then world its self!
i planned out everything
i was going to do with them!!
i cld wait til they were born
than next thing ik they are dead!!
when i find that out i cant breathe i cant speak i just run,run far away for a while to this day i cant believe it u two were sou young you two were my twin bro nd sister nd you were gone be4
i cld even see you
you 2 were still born that hurt me i cry every day i want you back god u are taking everyone from me nd it hurt i loved them i want them back i demand them back now

they were so young





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blackamethyst said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 11:34 am
I'm so sorry. It's good that you can vent via writing, though
 
vamppoet16 said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 12:51 pm
wow this is a very good piece. i love it
 
emo.panda101 replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:38 pm
thanks it was bout my bro nd sister who died in march
 
vamppoet16 replied...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 9:27 am
aww sweetheart. r u ok? god thats horrible. if u ever need anyone to talk to im here..
 
emo.panda101 replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 5:31 pm
thanks i am glad you love it
 
Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 6:59 pm
This is very sad and beautifully written, however the abbreviations and computer speak detracted from the piece.
ZERO
 
emo.panda101 replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 1:58 pm
what? idk what u mean by that
 
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