♥♥they were so young!!!!♥♥

August 10, 2009
By emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!


y god?
y did you have to take them away from me?
what did i do to deserve this?
i loved them more
then world its self!
i planned out everything
i was going to do with them!!
i cld wait til they were born
than next thing ik they are dead!!
when i find that out i cant breathe i cant speak i just run,run far away for a while to this day i cant believe it u two were sou young you two were my twin bro nd sister nd you were gone be4
i cld even see you
you 2 were still born that hurt me i cry every day i want you back god u are taking everyone from me nd it hurt i loved them i want them back i demand them back now

they were so young



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on Jan. 24 2010 at 11:34 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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I'm so sorry. It's good that you can vent via writing, though

on Sep. 19 2009 at 5:31 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!

thanks i am glad you love it

on Sep. 14 2009 at 9:27 am
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
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"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

aww sweetheart. r u ok? god thats horrible. if u ever need anyone to talk to im here..

on Sep. 13 2009 at 2:38 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!

thanks it was bout my bro nd sister who died in march

on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:51 pm
vamppoet16 SILVER, Hayden, Alabama
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"If i tell you I love you, can I keep you forever?"

wow this is a very good piece. i love it

on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:58 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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iam the greatest dork!!

what? idk what u mean by that

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 6:59 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

This is very sad and beautifully written, however the abbreviations and computer speak detracted from the piece.

ZERO




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