The feeling

August 10, 2009
By BethBeth BRONZE, Salter Path, North Carolina
BethBeth BRONZE, Salter Path, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"We can commit the perfect crime, I'll steal your heart and you can steal mine."

Your arms hold me tight
Your strength is my might
In your eyes i see the light
Your all i think about at night

Your breath on my neck
Your hands in mine
Your love I die for
Your love I cry for

The touch of your hands on my skin
It's you i confide in
You are on my mind all the time
Thoughts racing in my head
"I love you." He said

The feelings came so fast
It's another world at last
Only me and you
Just us two
Nobody else here
There is no more fear

Your words keep me warm
Even in a storm
Your stare holds my heart
Our love won't fall apart
You took my breath away
This feeling of sensation can stay

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Katie.T. GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 4:52 pm
Katie.T. GOLD, Chaptico, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Why go for a 100%, when with a little more, you can have 110%." -KT

I wrote a poem similar to this one so I can relate. Just as I like mine, I also love yours!


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