A Loss of Words

August 4, 2009
How could I have let those words escape me
A poem just waiting to be told!
Words that sparked my imagination
Then fled
Like a deer from wolves.
Frivolous, fleeting, frustrating, words.
These ones might have been good.
Oh well.
Back to bed.
Perhaps they will return.

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kiska_puppy11 said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:38 am
Wow I really like this poem! I like how you compare how the words are leaving your mind with "like a deer from wolves". Write more like this! I like this poem!
Ashlynrae replied...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 4:53 pm
Thanks for the feedback!
KonyaB!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 6:54 pm
Nice, it's funny too! :)
I hate it when the words to a poem escape me, it's really annoying, and I can't stop thinking about it. What were those lost words?? :)
Ashlynrae replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 8:54 pm
Haha thanks! Yeah I wish I knew.... ;)
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