August 4, 2009
By alicewannabe BRONZE, Houston, Texas
alicewannabe BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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A piece of my heart lies beneath the sea and above the sun.
The sea silently lulles me to sleep and his eyes rock me back and forth.
They sing me the song of the forest.
Slowly I rest my head above his heart counting the beats of rythmic drumming.
I fall asleep instintly, I wake up when the light claims my eyes.
I look up and see him coming out of the water, his body shines with the light of the sun like tiny diamond facets all over.
In the distance I hear him call my name.
Not knowing if it's a dream. Yet knowing I don't want to wake.
His arms caress me and everything melts away to a color a colorful dissary of shapes.
When I open my eyes he's gone.

The author's comments:
Inspired by the movie Twilight. I imagined a human Edward.

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This article has 3 comments.

MOTW said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 7:33 pm
So sweet, yet mature.

dvorah said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 8:13 pm
Great thoughts for a teenager!

haleonwheels said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 8:06 pm
Loved it!

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