You are Frail, but Strong

August 3, 2009
You are frail and thin,
Yet you remain strong.

You are tall and clumsy,
Yet your heart is kind.

You are weak and dying,
Yet you have selfless faith.

Your neighbors lean on you,
Yet you do not complain.

You are barely surviving,
Yet your arms reach out to those in need.

O' Great Jackpine Tree,
You are frail, but strong.

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relaxingcry said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:52 pm
can you please comment and/or rate my poem called once again please i would aprreciate it very much i wanna know what someone as talented as you thinks bout how i write :)
relaxingcry said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 4:39 pm
i love it!! i wish i could write like this keep writing your great
. replied...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 5:15 pm
Thank you so much! At first I thought it wasn't that good compared to all of the other things on here, but you made me feel a lot better about my poem:)
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