Make me shine

August 3, 2009
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Empty words, every one
Nothing to fear, except a gun.
I wish on a star that something will go wrong
Wish that something will make me strong.
Wish that something will go out of line
And make me wonder.
Make me fear. Make me shine.

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BookWorm579 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 11:36 pm
That which doesn't killus makes us stronger.
Sorry if that quote was a bit cliche, but I like this poem. It rephrases the saying and makes the message a little more subtle. It's always good to know when to say something outright and when to be a little poetic about it.
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