August 9, 2009
By GirlWithThePoems...x SILVER, Rugby, Other
GirlWithThePoems...x SILVER, Rugby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
look beyond the box that we hide in.

Staring through the window,
As rain drops down eyes,
Seasons changing,
Seeming to glide,
Away in the distance,
But can only see so far,
Glowing in the sun,
But dull in the dark,
Faces smiling,
Innocence shining through,
Pre-emptive disapointment surrounding,
Hearts vactaing in two,
The sun sets,
As the day dawns to a close,
Remorseful thinking,
Decisions that have been chose,
Stars are rising,
As heads to the floor,
Moonlit sparkles,
Among the glistening moor.

The author's comments:
This piece just came to me, this was the first piece of poetry I was really proud of, and this was when I realised that I could actually go somewhere with my poetry.

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This article has 3 comments.

floydie said...
on Aug. 31 2009 at 4:57 pm
Brilliant piece of work there Sophie-Grace H. Very very good, keep writing more!

Lcarter1993 said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 10:20 am
this is really good, it has alot of feeling to it and you can tell you havent sat and pushed for thoughts youve just done a touch up around the edges but i like it. :)

on Aug. 13 2009 at 9:17 pm
This is very good. Deep and powerful...however mysterious. You should be proud. awesome for a 16 year old [esp. younger than me]

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