Shadow

August 9, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


i am that lonely girl hiding in the shadows.
no one cares about me.
my thoughts mean nothing to them.
what am i to do?
i cant do anything.
no one cares what i think.
or what i do.
if i could i would surrender this sadness.
but i cant.
it pulls me in closer.
some day i will dissolve away.
no one will notice.
ill be gone.
forever.
lonelyness has its advantages.
and it got me big time.
gone forever in the shadow existence of my own thoughts.


The author's comments:
I wrote this when i had so many thoughts in my head i thought i was going to explode. comment please. thanks!! :)

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Sanah BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 11:11 pm
Sanah BRONZE, Bridgewater, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no exquisite beauty without some strangeness in the proportion" -Edgar Allan Poe

i can relate to this exactly with each word. you're great (: keep it upp!

Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 3:18 pm
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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I can relate to this poem... thank you for putting my feelings into words! This is amazing.



Slight correction: I believe "lonelyness" is spelled "loneliness" :)

Sorry for the arbitrary change haha.



Keep writing!!

Rasika GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 11:36 am
Rasika GOLD, MUMBAI, Other
11 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream high ,think high!!!

thanks for commenting on my poem. u really write well. keep writing.

on Aug. 11 2009 at 10:43 pm
krazykristen521 GOLD, Scottsville, Kentucky
16 articles 0 photos 4 comments
Thanks for commenting on my work. I am surprised that you read such a long peice and I decided to return the favor. You work is so realistic and it speaks to them because though you wrote a peice about you, others feel the same way.... exactly the same way at times.


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