August 9, 2009
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i am that lonely girl hiding in the shadows.
no one cares about me.
my thoughts mean nothing to them.
what am i to do?
i cant do anything.
no one cares what i think.
or what i do.
if i could i would surrender this sadness.
but i cant.
it pulls me in closer.
some day i will dissolve away.
no one will notice.
ill be gone.
lonelyness has its advantages.
and it got me big time.
gone forever in the shadow existence of my own thoughts.

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sweetlytorn11 said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 11:11 pm
i can relate to this exactly with each word. you're great (: keep it upp!
Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 3:18 pm
I can relate to this poem... thank you for putting my feelings into words! This is amazing.

Slight correction: I believe "lonelyness" is spelled "loneliness" :)
Sorry for the arbitrary change haha.

Keep writing!!
DIPTI said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 11:36 am
thanks for commenting on my poem. u really write well. keep writing.
krazykristen521 said...
Aug. 11, 2009 at 10:43 pm
Thanks for commenting on my work. I am surprised that you read such a long peice and I decided to return the favor. You work is so realistic and it speaks to them because though you wrote a peice about you, others feel the same way.... exactly the same way at times.
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