Gate to My Heart

i love it... it was really good.. that is kinda what happens to me.. i need someone to love me and never stop loving me and help me put back the pieces of my heart except keep one piece and put a piece of his to replace it. :-D

I loved it!!! you did an amazing job!!! I wish you hadn't explained it in the author's comments, though. leave it for the readers to figure out. :)

-five stars-

the first stanza is my fave. :)

thats amazing, and really deep. this is the first thing i have red of yours and i already know you have amazing talent. btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

Wow! thats good keep writing please. Don't stop expressing.

This is... indredible. You are so talented! I really do love this.
Keep writing and God bless,
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This poem is so beautiful! It deserves an amazing comment, but I just can't think of any other word but beautiful, and yet that doesn't even come close to describing how it truly has touched my own heart.

very nice! :) its really good!

This is such an awesome poem i love it 5 stars the gate to your heart is an awesome title i love this poem. God Bless!

Its really good, it has its flow.
Keep it up =]

tihi, nosy is good :) , no I don't actually but when I read a good book I have a tendency to write a matching poem sometimes so this is the one I wrote after reading Jinx, by Meg Cabot :D , really, you're comments make me smile like an idiot every time :)

this poem is very amazing and it really says alot, keep writing because this is truly magnificent

Thanks so much guys for your awesome comments, they really raise my heart up. I had always stunk at poetry and since this poem was my first ever poem, I thought that it wouldn't be good at all, but surprisingly tons of people like it. All I did was write my emotions on paper and it became a poem just like that. Thanks again!!