Pen touches paper
As squiggles of black appear
To change the whole world
As squiggles of black appear
To change the whole world
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Pen and Paper
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beautifulspirit
Cool---reminds us that one little thing can influence many.
inkers said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 12:24 am:
Jul. 28, 2011 at 12:24 am:
Very awesome work. It's hard to get your message across in a haiku, but you did it very well. <3
Aw, thank you. Yes, that's the thing with haikus, so I was hoping it would work out - fingers crossed ;)
zhlenthis is really good! i lyk it so much. i liked the last pt best. check out my wrks too. thanxs
*StandardToaster*cool poem. I like the last line the best.
StarfireInteresting poem. Cool title by th way. =)
Thanks so much! :)
Also, I love the quote you have on your profile.
Also, I love the quote you have on your profile.
Thanks. How do you write short poems I never can I always have to make them long or like a story.
I used to be like that too. Every time I wrote, it had to come out at least two pages long, usually around five ;)
While that was the way I normally wrote, I always found haikus really cool because people could fit so much meaning into three short lines. I got really frustrated cos I could never finish saying what I wanted to say every time I tried, but i don't know. I suppose you just have to keep trying ;)
While that was the way I normally wrote, I always found haikus really cool because people could fit so much meaning into three short lines. I got really frustrated cos I could never finish saying what I wanted to say every time I tried, but i don't know. I suppose you just have to keep trying ;)
oh ok thanks. hey could u read the first part of my story and leave a comment please and thank you.
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