You Were

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Hurt me and break me,
Only one person can do,
That person is you,

You were there for me,
Until you suddenly weren't,
- when I needed you,

You had disappeared,
You'd walked out, left me crying,
Alone, needing you,

'Cause you were the one,
Who had held me together,
You... were my best friend





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givemetherapy said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 10:11 am
this is really good. it describes something we've all been through. very nice job :)
 
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 10:15 am

Thanks so much :)

Your work is really good too!

 
greg9381 said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 9:40 pm
I like this. It tells an interesting story and it's cool how you made one poem out of 4 haikus.
 
annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 10:17 am

My apologies for taking so long to reply - I must have accidentally deleted my notification or something.

Thanks very much for your comment. It means a lot to me. 

And hahas, I had completely forgotten that I had written this completely in haikus 'til you pointed it out ;)

 
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