You Were

August 6, 2009
By taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.


Hurt me and break me,
Only one person can do,
That person is you,

You were there for me,
Until you suddenly weren't,
- when I needed you,

You had disappeared,
You'd walked out, left me crying,
Alone, needing you,

'Cause you were the one,
Who had held me together,
You... were my best friend


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on Jun. 19 2010 at 10:17 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

My apologies for taking so long to reply - I must have accidentally deleted my notification or something.

Thanks very much for your comment. It means a lot to me. 

And hahas, I had completely forgotten that I had written this completely in haikus 'til you pointed it out ;)


on Jun. 19 2010 at 10:15 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

Thanks so much :)

Your work is really good too!


on Jun. 18 2010 at 10:11 am
givemetherapy SILVER, Mount Vernon, Ohio
9 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is what you cling to when reality has left you with nothing else."

this is really good. it describes something we've all been through. very nice job :)

greg9381 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 9:40 pm
greg9381 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
12 articles 1 photo 50 comments
I like this. It tells an interesting story and it's cool how you made one poem out of 4 haikus.


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