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Every Part of You

August 5, 2009
By .AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
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Your eyes speak to me
They tell me about your life
The baby blue color
Fits you just right
Your lips look so kissable
With that perfect shade of pink
And when words come from them
I can barely think
Your hair flowing in the wind
It has so much style
When you let me play with it
It makes my day worthwhile
Your body is perfect
It makes you who you are
You could be a supermodel
Shine just like a star
You can be who you want to be
Just stay true
I must confess that I love
Every part of you


The author's comments:
This poem is about a person describing the one they love. It is in first person so it can be a girl or boy talking.

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Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:24 am
I think it is cute :D

on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:53 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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this is a very nice piece. the rhyming makes it flow perfectly and although the content isn't extremely deep, it connects with a lot of people and has a great, sweet meaning :) great job! i love it! check out some of my work and comment, i love the opinions. keep writing :)