Hakiku perfection

August 5, 2009
By wickedlove BRONZE, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
wickedlove BRONZE, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
4 articles 11 photos 6 comments

You are human
you lie you fall you die
perfect has no meaning


The author's comments:
A hikiku about human and how pperfection has no meaning in a human world. or any world for that matter

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on Aug. 18 2009 at 5:33 pm
wickedlove BRONZE, Lebanon, Pennsylvania
4 articles 11 photos 6 comments
Thanks dreamer. Comments are loved.

on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:54 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

HOW TRUE!!! i actually love this...like LOVE it. it's true, it's thoughtful and it's very deep :) you did a great job writing this, and it has great meaning. 5 stars :) check out my work, i would love your opinion.




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