Twinkle Twinkle Falling Tears

By , Greenfield, IN
Twinkle twinkle falling tears,
Cutting will erase my fears.
Careful blood will pour out fast,
To stain the years that now have passed.
Twinkle twinkle falling tears,
Scars will tattoo all my years





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Rebecca B. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 4:25 am
This was amazing. It sent chills up my spine, the word choice: perfect. Great job. Wow.
 
mylifeisjustnoise said...
Aug. 15, 2009 at 2:05 pm
Thanks. I have, actually, quit. I've been cut free for just over four months now, and before that one slip up, it had been even longer.
 
Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 12:25 am
How is it possible to turn a beloved childrens song into something so sad. It's a great poem. I have two friends who used to cut. One got over it and it almost killed the other and she had to get surgery to repair the muscle because she cut to deep. You need to stop.
ZERO
 
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