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For miles and miles we walked together,
walked down the streets
walked down the lanes
some broader, some narrower
we didnt bother.

We talked for days ,for hrs, for months,
we communicate on cellphones for
midays and midaynights.

I still remember our dates and late nightparties,
our sessions in moonlight with
loveand laughter.

We shared our secrets,
We shared our past lives,
We shared our mutual bondings that
was in glow.

Then what more than this does the teen guy need?
Now only this question hovers over me
and encircles me
where wrong was I and where right was HE,
WAS IT A TRUE LOVE OR JUST THE DREAM.




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b@bygirl15 said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 2:22 pm:
that was an amazing poem i like it keep on writting..
 
diptrix replied...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 1:39 am :
thanx dear
 
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(Drew) said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 4:38 pm:
Impressive~I like it! Very cool
 
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DIPTI said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 3:46 am:
thanks for reading my poem.
 
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His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 1:49 am:
this is very deep. and it really makes you think. keep writing! :)
 
Rasika replied...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 9:19 am :
thnks a lot....
 
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