Cutting

March 17, 2009
By Girlstarz900@ PLATINUM, New City, New York
Girlstarz900@ PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Cutting

Scabs up
And down your
Arms

Each one
Is for every time
They made you
Feel depressed

Every mark
Tells the story of when
Your emotions
Over powered

Each drop
Of blood
Released from
The chains of those
Horrible memories

Every slash
Of the razor
On your skin
Commemorates a time
You made the wrong
Decision


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on Apr. 10 2012 at 6:06 pm
shapeshifter56 GOLD, Cave Creek, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain."
--Unknown Author

Well-written, emotional, deep, and relatable. Keep up the good work.

on Nov. 6 2010 at 11:35 am
xXxdancing_for_rainxXx, San Pedro, California
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so descriptive and true... i love it :)

on Nov. 3 2010 at 6:36 pm
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

good poem! but its arguable if cutting really is the wrong decision. just saying.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 10:42 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Amazing, five stars and favorited. It's so accurate. Good job.

on Sep. 9 2009 at 6:05 pm
Girlstarz900@ PLATINUM, New City, New York
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thanks a lot

on Aug. 5 2009 at 11:22 pm
pinksage33 BRONZE, Woodstock, New York
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This is really good!!! I like your emotion!!!


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