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It is the American Dream
What we all strive for and imagine
Indouble-wide trailers to double-wide mansions
In sprouting lakes of fake fish.
Nothing captures its essence
Unbound by time or dust or rot
The thingswe cherish still are lovingly patted
And brought through thecenturies.

It is more than a dream now
It's a reality that the millionshave made
Our heart and soul builds the heaven on earth.
A refuge for thesick,
And a shelter for the needy,
It is everything we desire.

Inthe cherry trucks and laughing children
To indolent teenagers with smokecircling
We see our dream and the actuality
It may not be perfect, but itis our heaven
And so disillusioned we conjure forth our hope.

In thepicket fences we see our childhood
In the sky we see our adulthood
And inthe middle we see our life.
Suspended, but not contained,
It is the dreamthat wakes within us all.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Enigmapleet said...
today at 8:06 am:
POEM REALLY STANDS OUT........  
 
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AbbeyWThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 2 at 10:42 pm:
Awesome! I'm trying to get better and would love some constructive criticism. Would you mind checking out my work? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/678285/Under/
 
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moderndayEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 19 at 10:51 am:
I'm honored, that you shared this. Thank you; know that someone looks up to you and you are a treasure.
 
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AbigailGilgalThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 3 at 9:33 pm:
K, I really like the poem but did you mean to run those words together? Or is it a typo? A little confused here
 
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RanaHewezi1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 18 at 12:06 pm:
Wow incredible! Keep up the good work :D
 
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Zballer23 said...
Feb. 24 at 10:04 am:
great read
 
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laurensoccer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 21, 2013 at 9:55 pm:
I could really picture everything that was said! I love the vivid imagery!
 
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KingFoeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 6, 2013 at 5:19 pm:
The last stanza is the best, but the rest of it doesn't seem to flow entirely (message wise, not in words). But all in all it's a pretty great poem.
 
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Mark said...
Oct. 7, 2013 at 9:56 pm:
Love it! Great peom!!!
 
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YDUJYOT said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 4:59 pm:
I LOVE THE LAST STANZA
 
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RanaHewezi1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2013 at 6:59 pm:
wow that was really deep and thought out. Great job :D
 
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itsjustmeHannahThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 11:00 pm:
you are literally amazing. this is literally amazing. im at a loss for words here. 
 
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Vampslonglostlove said...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 3:24 pm:
Really great poem!
 
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theatregirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 10:34 pm:
Great poem! It really deep, especially compare moat teenage poem. I like all the description like "double wide trailer" compare to "double wide mansions". Great work, keep writing
 
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satellite23 said...
Jan. 5, 2013 at 8:51 pm:
This poem intrigues me, but I must ask what the combined words are for.
 
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mj914 said...
Sept. 22, 2012 at 8:34 am:
Hey! i was wondering if i could use your poem for a school assignment which was to find a poem that represents the american dream
 
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Kenziemcm13 said...
May 31, 2012 at 1:37 am:
Great peice of work! Loved it! Absolutely loved it! May I ask that you read a few of mine they are not nearly as good but I would be honored if you read them and commented what I could do better? Please! :)
 
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angel.stec said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 11:10 am:
I love the last lines. Can I quote it in a paper for school? 
 
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TenebraeIncarnati said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 11:27 am:
Nicely done. I give it a 5/5 rating because it's relative and well written. Keep up the good work.
 
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ImJustAGuy said...
Mar. 26, 2012 at 12:23 am:
This is great, i can actually relate a lot to it.  Keep up the great writing and i rated this a 5/5!   Please check out some of my work, im  a new and upcoming poet
 
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