A 14 Minute

August 1, 2009
By AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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The dusty laughs hugging the light,
Desire cracked in a silky night,
A found victim's, frosty, distant,
Life ends in a 14 minute.


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on Jul. 2 2010 at 9:54 pm
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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thanks! it means a lot :)

ill read some of ur stuff and tell yu what i think! :D


riley... GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 2:06 pm
riley... GOLD, Yakima, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"i became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity." edgar allen poe.

man youre good :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:52 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this is really good andyou're good & rhyming!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 8:07 pm
Faithband3 BRONZE, Westbury, New York
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This piece is definetely one of the best I've read by a teen.


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