A 14 Minute

August 1, 2009
The dusty laughs hugging the light,
Desire cracked in a silky night,
A found victim's, frosty, distant,
Life ends in a 14 minute.





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riley... said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 2:06 pm
man youre good :)
 
aub13zzz replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 9:54 pm

thanks! it means a lot :)

ill read some of ur stuff and tell yu what i think! :D

 
writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:52 pm
this is really good andyou're good & rhyming!
 
Chanel G. said...
Aug. 4, 2009 at 8:07 pm
This piece is definetely one of the best I've read by a teen.
 
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