August 1, 2009
By Jill_Swartz BRONZE, San Diego, California
Jill_Swartz BRONZE, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Aim for the moon because if you fall you will land somewhere among the stars."

Love is red or hot pink
The oozy and gooey potion
Bubbling up to the surface
And when you’re ready
It will pop out at you
When you least expect it
No one can stop it or control it
Just wondering what you should say
Because every word counts
It sounds like a piano playing soft music
While you drift away into a deep sleep
It is sweet but tender and you want to savor every minute of it
Its like your in a dark swirling hole
You’re sucked into something great
But then it can all shatter at your feet
Seeing, Believing, Questioning, and Finding the Truth
That’s what leads us on this journey so many people take
It’s the ride of adventure and sometimes failure
But still
It’s the ride of life.

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This article has 2 comments.

jonswartz said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 4:36 am
I like this poem a lot. The last three lines are especially beautiful and true. Way to go!

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 2:13 pm
I love this poem!!!!!!!! I can really relate to it!

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