Friendship

July 31, 2009
By Katie Arnese BRONZE, Pine Grove, California
Katie Arnese BRONZE, Pine Grove, California
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Friendship
Friendship is like pottery
It has its cracks, its breaks
It is usually taken for granted
No big deal, right?





Wrong!
Pottery takes time
It’s engraved




Invaluable
Pretty fragile, too One false move?







It’s over.



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on Mar. 10 2011 at 6:38 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I love the metaphors in here... they are fantastic!!!  Although I LOVE the poem... I don't see most friendships this way.  There are several drama queens that act like this, but real friends never treat you like this.  Like Sarah22 said... they are like dazzling diamonds.

on Aug. 6 2009 at 4:31 am
ladytrojan GOLD, Millington, Tennessee
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i dont see friendship this way. people who r ur real friends aren like pottery. there more like diamonds. u could kickit, throw it, and push it aside but in the long run its stil there.

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 2:17 pm
I love this poem....it tells the honest truth

on Aug. 5 2009 at 1:01 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

But it can be re-made:) I like the analogy and how you made each stanza mean more- standout more.


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