Waiting

July 31, 2009
By Dashuria BRONZE, Miami, Florida
Dashuria BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You can never really understand life's meaning, unless you realize who you are.


Love is not a time of hate
or coldness to thyself

The fire in your heart is lit
burning; waiting for a companion

He shall always see me
as a spring morning

As the dew on the leaves collapses below, and the sun shines above

But what shall I think of him
For he is as sweet as a summer's day

No one shall steal thy love between us

Nor shall death bring thy wanders inside

Still we wait,eye to eye
til' we shall truly face eachother again

If anyone were to disturb with thy fancies

As if me to see upon it
they will then see my true love


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem whenever I was in seventh grade. I had a huge crush on this guy, and I felt as if we had a connection. I had also recently been flipping through one of Shakespeare's novels, which had its turn into inspiring me about love stories.

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lala said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:56 pm
i love it fmf ur off the hissle!  jk i really liked it it was indeperenseibleism, it was the most thoudeperticism poem im ever read and let me tell you ive read poems that were indesteruptlis.

on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:21 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Wow, this is absolutely stunning! I really can see the Shakespeare in this, but also your own personal touch. You should put some more work on the site, this is really good. Seriously, I really mean it, never stop writing.

on Aug. 13 2009 at 6:56 pm
Dashuria BRONZE, Miami, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can never really understand life's meaning, unless you realize who you are.

Thanks for your comments :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 11 2009 at 8:45 pm
I like it. I can tell how the Shakespearean works inspired it as well.

PK4evr ELITE said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 9:23 pm
PK4evr ELITE, Allen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, make grape juice, then watch everyone wonder how you did it!

Aww, pretty! And I see the Shakespeare in it too!


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