July 30, 2009
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The hatred churns inside me making everything hurt, as I feel the burn of my eyes
And feel the slight pain in my chest, the lump in my throat as I feel the anger rise as I hear the shame in your voice.

My head screams and every thought goes through like a bullet all at the same Time, I feel my face burn as I tell myself, You're fine, you're just fine. I know my Mind can't shape me, when I know I'm fragile glass and now someone tried to bend Me, mold me like clay and I shattered in their hands.

Do you shatter when everythings falling apart?

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FashionGuru said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 4:55 pm
Yeah this is good. I like all of the metaphors. I think that there is a deeper meaning than just what is on the surface. and thanks for adding two of my poems to your favs!!!!!
mana15 replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 8:03 pm
Your welcome. You are a very good writer.
mana15 said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 7:09 pm
I think it's good,
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