Shattered

July 30, 2009
By mana15 GOLD, Newark, New York
mana15 GOLD, Newark, New York
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Shattered





The hatred churns inside me making everything hurt, as I feel the burn of my eyes
And feel the slight pain in my chest, the lump in my throat as I feel the anger rise as I hear the shame in your voice.


My head screams and every thought goes through like a bullet all at the same Time, I feel my face burn as I tell myself, You're fine, you're just fine. I know my Mind can't shape me, when I know I'm fragile glass and now someone tried to bend Me, mold me like clay and I shattered in their hands.

Do you shatter when everythings falling apart?


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mana15 GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 8:03 pm
mana15 GOLD, Newark, New York
17 articles 0 photos 28 comments
Your welcome. You are a very good writer.

on Sep. 14 2009 at 4:55 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Yeah this is good. I like all of the metaphors. I think that there is a deeper meaning than just what is on the surface. and thanks for adding two of my poems to your favs!!!!!

mana15 GOLD said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 7:09 pm
mana15 GOLD, Newark, New York
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I think it's good,




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