Reality Check

July 29, 2009
By theoneandonly BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
theoneandonly BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
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Now I realize,
After you said goodbye
That I didn’t even try
To stop you as you went by.
I guess all the lies
Came between us and untied
The bond that was once alive,
The attraction and the vibe.
Now I remember, time after time
How you attempted, line after line;
To tell me how angry
You got when I pretended
To love you, but I never intended
For it to stop but as it ended
On the wrong note
Without me stating my last quote;
But what I wrote was not a joke
It was though, my real thoughts
Let me stop
I really tried to keep up,
But I slipped up.
Enough excuses,
Time left to focus on the bruises



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Milo! said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 11:56 am
How long did it take for them to put this on the website?

on Feb. 27 2010 at 1:51 am
theoneandonly BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Thank you. I'm realy glad you like it.

Milo! said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:21 pm
I really like this. It's cute and makes a point.


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