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Dry tears falling
one after the other
your hands stained with the soul you have taken
a life lost
a life that was controlled by you.

The vast emptiness

an echoing chamber of silence

the bottomless cavern

forever falling the shattered remains.
Lies-the catalysts of pain.

Forgive and forget

and endure hurt again.
Dive deeper still
tearing, still, further every time.

Won’t bear to live

one moment away

yet not able to live on

a moment’s stay.
Eaten from the inside out
burning up
crying out.

Dying within

of a broken heart.
Torn to pieces
covered by prints
belonging to you.





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Ugaldeteach said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 2:12 am
I love the first line. But, most of all, I love that you sent this to me! E-mail me :-)
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2009 at 7:35 pm
Wow! i love this! Its so beautiful. The only criticism i can possibly give is that the ending is a little weak compared to the beginning. but that issue is microscopic. Amazing!
 
Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 10:52 pm
This is very depressing. Good, but depressing. ZERO
 
Joeker said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 7:06 pm
i like your writing style...and your topic...i can definetely understand you
 
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