July 21, 2009
By Alli Jenney BRONZE, Poway, California
Alli Jenney BRONZE, Poway, California
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Dry tears falling
one after the other
your hands stained with the soul you have taken
a life lost
a life that was controlled by you.

The vast emptiness

an echoing chamber of silence

the bottomless cavern

forever falling the shattered remains.
Lies-the catalysts of pain.

Forgive and forget

and endure hurt again.
Dive deeper still
tearing, still, further every time.

Won’t bear to live

one moment away

yet not able to live on

a moment’s stay.
Eaten from the inside out
burning up
crying out.

Dying within

of a broken heart.
Torn to pieces
covered by prints
belonging to you.

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Ugaldeteach said...
on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:12 am
I love the first line. But, most of all, I love that you sent this to me! E-mail me :-)

on Aug. 2 2009 at 7:35 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Wow! i love this! Its so beautiful. The only criticism i can possibly give is that the ending is a little weak compared to the beginning. but that issue is microscopic. Amazing!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 10:52 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

This is very depressing. Good, but depressing. ZERO

Joeker BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 7:06 pm
Joeker BRONZE, Belleville, New York
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i like your writing style...and your topic...i can definetely understand you

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