When Love Comes Around

July 20, 2009
When love comes around, it doesn't leave you when you break down

When love comes around, it is there for you when you need a shoulder to cry on.

When love comes around, it doesn't break down on the side of a highway

When love comes around, it knocks you down and then it's right there to pick you up again.

When love comes around, you have to get up and brush the dirt off your shoulders.





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ayeBNFx3 said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 6:01 am
Very Very Touching
 
vickilovesu0227 replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 10:06 am
Thanks! I don't really mean to put that much emotion in my poems, but it comes across like that, and i don't mind
 
Lonleydandy said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 12:46 am
I really like this poem!
 
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 4, 2009 at 9:38 pm
wow! this is really good, and soooooo true! you did a great job writing this, i can feel the emotion :) comment on some of my work please, i would love your opinion!
 
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