The Colors

July 18, 2009
By Ryan Swofford BRONZE, Marcola, Oregon
Ryan Swofford BRONZE, Marcola, Oregon
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Gray sunlight
Black skies
Blue eyes
and White lies
Purple veins
Yellow bruises
Green grass
and Orange juices...

The author's comments:
One word: Colors

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on Jun. 8 2011 at 12:01 am
Annieboo SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
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Some one who gets tricked is a fool. Some one who trusts is an even bigger fool. But if you get tricked and tricked again...and still trust...that's makes you the best person to know.

This is good. I like how you make it so colorful. But if you want it to be better. Focus on one color. It will let the essence of your writing stronger. 


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