Forever Stained

July 18, 2009
By AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget


I wish I was numb so I didn't have to feel the pain
I wish I was blind so wouldn't have to see the rain
The thick, black clouds darken the sky
They can't say I've quit, they haven't seen me try
Outside, I let the rain hit my skin
I lift my arms and pray "Forgive my every sin"
After the storm, there's a ray of hope
A rainbow with it's magnificent slope
The colors I've imagined, but couldn't see
To lighten the darkness that hangs over me
A few moments of peace, then it's gone
I step discouraged across the wet lawn
My bare feet leave imprints on the ground
I wish somehow my faith could be found
My trust went out the window long ago
What went with, I don't know
But what went was replaced with what I feel:
Hurt, anger, sorrow, emptiness, it's so real
If pictures are worth a thousand words, then what about this?
A thousand times ten wouldn't be a miss
I feel the blades of wet grass beneath my fingertips
A tear falls on my trembling lips
I can't feel it, but I know I'm cold
A flower in my hand I hold
I'm too blind to see it's beauty
Though it's right here for me to see
I'm so filled with my dark eptiness
But to no one I can confess
I'm used to the darkness, but I can't sleep
I can't spill the secrets none can keep
I hate this feeling I have inside
It follows me everywhere, there's no place to hide
As I sit in the grass, again it starts to pour
My feeling returns, I'm chilled to the core
I stand and start to run with the rain
For I know, deep down, I'll forever be stained
With the blood of the impact you made on my life-
The life you undeniably cut with your scythe



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kressbe BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:45 pm
kressbe BRONZE, Mequon, Wisconsin
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"I can't feel it, but I know I'm cold"

cool.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 8:39 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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This is so good!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 10:07 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This was really AWESOME!!!! A chick can actually relate to this one!!! It's mysterious, but yet clearer than water..... keep up the good work!!!!!!!

Carol BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:42 pm
Carol BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 33 comments
Holy... That was good. Wow, it has so much emotion coming from it. Definetely one of your best. :)

Rage97 GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 11:39 am
Rage97 GOLD, Hughesville, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
" 3 out of 2 people have problems with fractions"
" History will be kind to me, for I intend to write it"

Wow, this really is a good poem, and I can relate to you because, I will always be forever stained and good luck with healing but I can't cause hurt follows me were ever I go. Good luck with your problems, lots of love

on Nov. 26 2009 at 9:44 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I mean, I can really relate to this! Things have been happening a lot lately and I just took the first step to healing, so it's still really hard. But I will be forever stained. Thank you for writing this!

on Nov. 24 2009 at 10:43 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

thank you!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 3:49 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

Awesome! I love this poem, it's really really good! The picture you put with it is perfect. I love this, keep writing, your really good!

Yung E.R.C said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:42 am
This poem is awsome I love the character you put this into its like watching a movie but im reading. Good luck. And your a great poet!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 9:28 pm
CosmicHorse95 PLATINUM, Milltown, Wisconsin
20 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is nothing better for the inside of a person than the outside of a horse.

This was the first piece you ever showed me... i just love it! :)

on Aug. 19 2009 at 4:54 pm
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
26 articles 1 photo 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...”

Wow. That's basically all I have to say.

Just... Wow.

Kudos.

on Aug. 19 2009 at 4:39 pm
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
66 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

Thank you! :)

on Aug. 19 2009 at 4:15 am
sgtpepperx3 SILVER, Brick, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments
I really like this! The rhyming is very well done; it really makes the poem flow very well. Good work!


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