tears of the abused

July 17, 2009
By caniblexcarmen BRONZE, Auckland, Other
caniblexcarmen BRONZE, Auckland, Other
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Feel deaths grip clawing at my spine.
ive heard this same damn argument ten thousand times.
Try to find a map to get outa this place.
The blood form your knuckels is all that i taste.
Try to hide the hate i feel inside.
But all the pain wants to do is be by my side
T try to fight i try to scream but pain never leaves and it seems.
Well always be an unsepratable pair.
Fall in the night my silent tear

The author's comments:
im not sure if its any good but ..oh well haha

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on Aug. 29 2009 at 1:51 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your´╗┐ funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

this is really good! very metaphorical! i love the rhyming! keep it up! and if u hav time check out some of my stuff too plz! :)

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