What I Look Up To

July 16, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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The sky oh how it embellishes
The magnificence of the empty
Dreamy wistful blankness
Wondering its kept me

The capture of the sunlight
Icy breath of the wind
The clouds what a sight
See the beauty deep within?

Fresh moisture in the air
Rain droplets on your nose
The clouds did their share
Puzzle of sky you knows

The sky is flowing
The sky is bright
The sky has dark shadows
Imitating night

When you look up into the haze
Don’t close your eyes
Don’t be dazed
Look beyond where the sky lies


The author's comments:
I really enjoy sunrises and sunsets and other optical illusions the sky gives. Besides unicorn-shaped clouds of course.

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on Dec. 28 2009 at 3:34 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

I love this poem! It's def. being added to my faves. Great imagry, great rhythm, just purely great! Keep it up!

Jennax3 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:04 pm
Jennax3 SILVER, Palos Verdes Estates, California
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Very cool! Leaves you with a dreamy feeling....

on Aug. 7 2009 at 6:53 pm
artmusiclit_chic GOLD, Riverside, Rhode Island
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I really like how you compared the wind to "icy breath". Nice metaphor.

on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:42 am
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

This is very well-written! Again, great job, and, as always, I love your work! Keep it up!


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