July 16, 2009
I don’t care

Plotting revenge . . .

Doesn’t matter to me

Why did I trust you?

Already moving on

Thanks for everything, jerk!

Forgetting you starting now

Shedding tears because of you . . .

Got a whole phonebook of names

You’re blinking in my mind!

Enjoy your life

While betrayal is burning me.

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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 5:49 pm
It's the first time I've done a poem like that, so your comment means a lot to me. Thank you, tigeress3!
tigeress3 said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 3:41 pm
Beautiful. I love the choppy lines.
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 10:20 pm
Thanks a million, BeccaBlue826! That's really what I wanted to convey through the poem, the tangle of emotions after you've been hurt by someone. I'm glad that you think it could also work for a friend, too.
BeccaBlue826 said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 7:34 am
i sometimes express anger in happiness and sadness in anger...emotions just get jummbled up sometimes but its fine because at least something good came from this peice very good emotion...and it kind of sounds like a 'close' back stabbing friend...
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