Renegade

July 15, 2009
By ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac


She stood by her beliefs
Never giving up on them
Proving herself high in self-esteem

Until another planet moved into her
Galaxy
Taking her guard down
Rendering her beliefs

I solely believe she is falling apart
Although she appears strong, "hard"
"independent"
It's all a front, her world is
Sundering

Who am I to judge what's going
On in her life?
Who am I to speak? Or contradict The truth of a lie?

I just look in her eyes.
That's where all the hurt is reflected
Not even a mirror could reflect the truth
To the point where she understands

We all knew who she was
And what she stood for
It took one word for change
She is the renegade



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on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:41 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

this is really, really good. and you're right- it does remind me of my poem "gone without a trace"

on Aug. 18 2009 at 1:28 am
NascentNovelist GOLD, Syracuse, Utah
15 articles 3 photos 15 comments
I love this piece. It reminds me of a friend that I have. There are people that turn over time, people that change into something else. Often times you just watch and know that there is nothing you can do.

on Aug. 14 2009 at 7:11 pm
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
26 articles 1 photo 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...”

Very nice. You have talent. True talent. I know it.

Kapish to that. ;)

on Aug. 4 2009 at 3:34 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow this is really good! i like it a lot. keep writing because you definetly have some good talent here :) comment on my work. i would love your opinion.




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