Precious Moments

I want to go back to my past,
and make those moments last,
when we were still friends.

I want to relive those days,
cause i miss your cute ways,
i want this misunderstanding to end.

As hard as i try,
i can do nothing,but cry
since it causes great pain.

To know that what we shared,
And the feeling-that you cared,
will never be the same again...





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dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 7:57 pm
great job :) i can relate to this easily and you did well writing down emotions and thoughts in your head and turning it into a great poem :) bravo! 4 stars :) if you get a chance, check out some of my work, i would love the feedback. keep writing :)
 
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