July 20, 2009
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Snowflakes fall to the ground,
My ankles under the snow
Your voice rings in my mind,
As a tear glides down my cheek.
You knew I loved you,
And you had finally admitted that you did too.
But when you did,
I had changed my mind.
And it tore you apart.
Now every time I think about you,
One question burns in my mind.
The last thing I heard you say to me.

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jenx0x3 said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 1:14 pm
i love it and I loved your story about the journal!
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ replied...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 2:15 pm
omg thanks! but, which one? the journal and the mistake or... my crazy messed up seventh grade year?
jenx0x3 replied...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 7:35 pm
the journal and the mistake but I also liked your seventh grade year story mine was pretty much as chaotic as yours.. sadly
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ replied...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 5:54 pm
really? wow. that's ironic. and thank you!
jenx0x3 replied...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 6:03 pm
ikr! and your welcome <3
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 5:46 pm
lol. all my friends think i'm crazy because of what happens to me btw. it's really weird for them to be around me because i'm like the center of the gossip most of the time.
. replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 7:39 pm
lol same here but now my life is pretty mellow which is good 4 me! lol
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 8:08 pm
hah! same here! O.O
iluvfruitbasket3 said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 4:57 pm
great poem
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ replied...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 10:14 am
thanks so much!! :)
FashionGuru said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 4:52 pm
Wow that totally happens to me all of the time. I actually had a dream a couple nights ago that the guy i thought i was in love with, also my BFF, liked me back too. But it was a dream :( Keep up the great writing!!
His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 4:08 pm
this dream was very vivid and clear and it was almost like it actually happened. I woke up really freaked out. I never knew i was sleeping.
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