Why?

July 20, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


Snowflakes fall to the ground,
My ankles under the snow
Your voice rings in my mind,
As a tear glides down my cheek.
You knew I loved you,
And you had finally admitted that you did too.
But when you did,
I had changed my mind.
And it tore you apart.
Now every time I think about you,
One question burns in my mind.
The last thing I heard you say to me.
Why?


The author's comments:
I dreamt this one. It kinda scares me because it was so real i thought for a minute that it actually HAPPENED.

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on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:08 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

hah! same here! O.O

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on Oct. 18 2009 at 7:39 pm
lol same here but now my life is pretty mellow which is good 4 me! lol

on Oct. 18 2009 at 5:46 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

lol. all my friends think i'm crazy because of what happens to me btw. it's really weird for them to be around me because i'm like the center of the gossip most of the time.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 6:03 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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ikr! and your welcome <3

on Oct. 14 2009 at 5:54 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

really? wow. that's ironic. and thank you!

on Sep. 6 2009 at 7:35 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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the journal and the mistake but I also liked your seventh grade year story mine was pretty much as chaotic as yours.. sadly

on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:15 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

omg thanks! but, which one? the journal and the mistake or... my crazy messed up seventh grade year?

on Sep. 6 2009 at 1:14 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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i love it and I loved your story about the journal!

on Sep. 3 2009 at 10:14 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

thanks so much!! :)

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on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:57 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
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great poem

on Aug. 1 2009 at 4:52 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Wow that totally happens to me all of the time. I actually had a dream a couple nights ago that the guy i thought i was in love with, also my BFF, liked me back too. But it was a dream :( Keep up the great writing!!

on Jul. 31 2009 at 4:08 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

this dream was very vivid and clear and it was almost like it actually happened. I woke up really freaked out. I never knew i was sleeping.


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