Those Who Judge Me MAG

July 15, 2009
By AaronMitchell GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
AaronMitchell GOLD, Picayune, Mississippi
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I'm like those who judge me.
I laugh when I hear a joke I like
I cry when I lose someone I love
I want to be surrounded by friends, not empty spaces
I hide myself inside a marble shell
I don't trust those who are kind to me
To be myself is not in my agenda
Instead I fight to stay hidden
Behind crumbling walls
Of marble, granite, and pieces of my heart
Am I human?
Why, yes I am.
I fret for today and hope for tomorrow.
I make mistakes that haunt me.
I make friends
I lose them.
I shoot for the stars
But I land back on the ground.
I dream of the future and repress the past
I'm like those who judge me.
They look at me
Porcelain people staring at a body of clay
But do they not see that we both bleed red
We dream in pleasant places
And sometimes in dark valleys
I'm like those who judge me.



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on Jun. 4 2011 at 4:03 pm
LunaIsNotHere BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"I admire the concept of selling your soul for the sake of an unforgettable performance"

Love it!! :)

on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:25 am
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

wow, amazing! keep it up!!

on Jun. 5 2010 at 8:36 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

very nice, i loved it. that was really good:)))

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:51 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

we're all equal, but some people a loss of brain. i can sense how you feel and i can't comment and tell you how that is, but some things are left better w/o words to destroy the silence. good job though. i liked it :)

on Dec. 20 2009 at 11:32 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

I love this poem. It is so, so true. I feel what you're saying here.


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