What Could Happen

July 9, 2009
The Clouds
Those Clouds
The Sun
That Sun
The Trees
Those Trees
The Run
That Run

The Grass
That Grass
The Moon
That Moon
The Seas
Those Seas
The Cocoons
Those Cocoons

The House
That House
The Man
That Man
The Girl
That Girl
The Tan
That Tan

The Bees
Those Bees
The Money
That Money
The Wild
That Wild
The Honey
That honey

They all seem pointless
They're really not
Soon they could be gone
This world will be a big knot

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EMOEMY said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 4:48 pm
That was confusing at first but then I read your comment thanks so much your a really good beginner keep righting please :-)
TheUnknownGuest replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 1:37 am
I will. Thank you!
His-Bright-Green-Eyes... said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 4:27 pm
this is good. very awesome. keep up the good writing! and thank you for the comment on my exact you poem.
unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 6:09 pm
I love the poem, and the repetition of the items. I just think that maybe you should change the last line, because I don't think it fits in with the poems theme.
TheUnknownGuest replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 1:39 am
I agree! I couldn't think of what to replace it with. If I found out how to edit the whole article without deleting it and reposting, I would.
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