God is with His Children

July 14, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


God is with His Children
I know that this is true,
He watches over me
And He watches over you;
He knows when you laugh and cry
He hears each ones quiet sighs,
I know that He is right near by
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them very well,
He even saved my sinful soul
From falling into hell.
He'll help you in the good times,
He'll help you in the bad,
He comforts when your feeling sad;
This thought makes me very glad!
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them all by name,
And when it comes for them to die
Their souls He will reclaim.
Then as we stand before His throne
His face we all shall see;
And oh, what a glorious day
that shall be!
when God is with His Children.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for extra credit in my history class! This is also my first poem, so it might not be as great as other poems. Enjoy, and feel free to comment.

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on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:13 pm
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
14 articles 11 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be."

Gave me chills!! No lie! X) It's such a happy-feely poem. =) Nice rhymes. ;P

Shells SILVER said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:08 pm
Shells SILVER, Dixon, Wyoming
7 articles 6 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The dye has been cast. The decision has been made. I have stepped over the line. I won’t look back, let up, slow down, or back away. My past is redeemed, my present makes sense, my future secure. I’m done with low living, sight walking, small planning, colorless dreams, tamed visions, mundane talking, cheap living and dwarfed goals: I no longer need preeminence, prosperity, positions, promotions, or popularity. I don’t have to be right, first, tops, recognized, praised, regarded or rewarded. I now live by faith, lean on His presence, walk with patience, live by prayer and labor with power. My face is set, my goal is Heaven, my road is narrow, my way is rough, my companions are few, my Guide is reliable, my mission clear. I cannot be bought, compromised, detoured, lured away, turned back, deluded or delayed. I will not flinch in the face of sacrifice, hesitate in the presence of adversary, negotiate at the table of the enemy, ponder at the pool of popularity or meander in the maze of mediocrity. I won’t give up, shut up, let up, until I have stayed up, stored up, prayed up, paid up, and spoken up for the cause of Christ. I am a disciple of the lord Jesus Christ.” - African martyred for Christ.

Beautiful! This poem is awesome, I love it! Great job!:)

on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:47 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much! I have to say that I am in love with your work, and drawings, they are amazing! Keep it up, and thanks again! :)

on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:15 am
brewcrew#44 SILVER, Kanab, Utah
7 articles 10 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Courage is being scared to death but saddling up anyway”
John Wayne

thanks for the comment and you are a very good poet and i never learned to draw just started oneday but thank you again for all the complements i love your work it very good and very interesting to read

on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:38 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!! It means so much for a really good writer to comment on my work! Thanks again! ;)

on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:27 pm
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
This is such a touching poem! I love it its very good for the soul love it keep up the great work :D God bless!

on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:05 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much, you just made my day!! :) If I haven't, I'll be sure to check out your work, I know it's probally GREAT! ;)

PippinP GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:00 pm
PippinP GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Faith is like learning to walk; you have to fall at first, but don't stay down. When in doubt, don't stop believing.

Awesome!!! I love it!

on Sep. 2 2009 at 3:14 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks so much, and I did check out your stuff, very good, I loved it all! You have so much talent!

on Sep. 2 2009 at 3:13 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!

on Aug. 21 2009 at 11:46 pm
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think therefore I am

wow this poem is amazing, nice job! definitely keep writing!

on Aug. 12 2009 at 8:54 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
ps check out my sort of long (sorry!) poem called Passover to Ascension in a Rhyming Dimension I think you would enjoy it

on Aug. 12 2009 at 8:51 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
I like this.

and thanks for commenting on my sunset pic, btw!

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 10 2009 at 1:22 am
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
83 articles 0 photos 435 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I love this poem. I agree with April. When you read this it makes losing people easier somehow. I want to print it out and paste it to my wall so when I lose someone I'll be reminded that the person really is in a better place.

ZERO

April. BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2009 at 8:31 pm
April. BRONZE, Lake Charles, Louisiana
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments
My eyes are seriously watering. I absolutely love this poem. The end gives me comfort from those I have lost. Everyone always says that people are in a better place or that it will be okay cause God is with you or even that he sees everything you do. But this sums it all up in a comforting and beautiful way. I LOVE it.

on Aug. 7 2009 at 3:41 am
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
4 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

You're not serious that this is your poem? I agree that you should turn it into a children's book. GOD LOVES!!! Keep writing!

on Aug. 7 2009 at 2:54 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I just want to thank all you out there that has commented on my work!!!!! It means SO much to me!!! Love you all!!!!! Lol <3

on Aug. 6 2009 at 1:42 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

hey :) you commented on some of my work, and i wanted to check yours out and im VERY glad i did!! for your first poem you are really really good, and you for sure have a future in writing :) i like this piece a lot. it gave me a lot of hope. great job though and keep it up :)

on Aug. 5 2009 at 10:01 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
I can't believe that's your first poem; it's great! i started loving it from the first line (: you should definately keep writing more!

on Aug. 4 2009 at 12:16 am
Carolina SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 32 comments
Very excellent poem. It sounds like it could be a little picture book, it's so good. Keep the good work up!


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