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God is with His Children

God is with His Children
I know that this is true,
He watches over me
And He watches over you;
He knows when you laugh and cry
He hears each ones quiet sighs,
I know that He is right near by
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them very well,
He even saved my sinful soul
From falling into hell.
He'll help you in the good times,
He'll help you in the bad,
He comforts when your feeling sad;
This thought makes me very glad!
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them all by name,
And when it comes for them to die
Their souls He will reclaim.
Then as we stand before His throne
His face we all shall see;
And oh, what a glorious day
that shall be!
when God is with His Children.




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Shelley said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 6:08 pm:
Beautiful! This poem is awesome, I love it! Great job!:)
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:18 pm :
Thanks, that made my day! :)
 
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mikeb said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:15 am:
thanks for the comment and you are a very good poet and i never learned to draw just started oneday but thank you again for all the complements i love your work it very good and very interesting to read
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 2:47 pm :
Thank you so much! I have to say that I am in love with your work, and drawings, they are amazing! Keep it up, and thanks again! :)
 
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Dreamer123 said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 6:27 pm:
This is such a touching poem! I love it its very good for the soul love it keep up the great work :D God bless!
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 6:38 pm :
Thank you so much!!! It means so much for a really good writer to comment on my work! Thanks again! ;)
 
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SheilaZyra said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:00 pm:
Awesome!!! I love it!
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:05 pm :
Thanks so much, you just made my day!! :) If I haven't, I'll be sure to check out your work, I know it's probally GREAT! ;)
 
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PinkPrincess said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 11:46 pm:
wow this poem is amazing, nice job! definitely keep writing!
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 3:13 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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kiwi12 said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 8:54 pm:
ps check out my sort of long (sorry!) poem called Passover to Ascension in a Rhyming Dimension I think you would enjoy it
 
distant_dreamer replied...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 3:14 pm :
Thanks so much, and I did check out your stuff, very good, I loved it all! You have so much talent!
 
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kiwi12 said...
Aug. 12, 2009 at 8:51 pm:
I like this.
and thanks for commenting on my sunset pic, btw!
 
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Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 1:22 am:
I love this poem. I agree with April. When you read this it makes losing people easier somehow. I want to print it out and paste it to my wall so when I lose someone I'll be reminded that the person really is in a better place.
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April. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 8:31 pm:
My eyes are seriously watering. I absolutely love this poem. The end gives me comfort from those I have lost. Everyone always says that people are in a better place or that it will be okay cause God is with you or even that he sees everything you do. But this sums it all up in a comforting and beautiful way. I LOVE it.
 
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RheaD.Ravenfinger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 3:41 am:
You're not serious that this is your poem? I agree that you should turn it into a children's book. GOD LOVES!!! Keep writing!
 
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distant_dreamer said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 2:54 am:
I just want to thank all you out there that has commented on my work!!!!! It means SO much to me!!! Love you all!!!!! Lol <3
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 1:42 am:
hey :) you commented on some of my work, and i wanted to check yours out and im VERY glad i did!! for your first poem you are really really good, and you for sure have a future in writing :) i like this piece a lot. it gave me a lot of hope. great job though and keep it up :)
 
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SilverDawn said...
Aug. 5, 2009 at 10:01 pm:
I can't believe that's your first poem; it's great! i started loving it from the first line (: you should definately keep writing more!
 
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Carolina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2009 at 12:16 am:
Very excellent poem. It sounds like it could be a little picture book, it's so good. Keep the good work up!
 
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munchkinrocks This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2009 at 8:27 pm:
Wow this is really beautiful.=]
 
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