God is with His Children

July 14, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


God is with His Children
I know that this is true,
He watches over me
And He watches over you;
He knows when you laugh and cry
He hears each ones quiet sighs,
I know that He is right near by
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them very well,
He even saved my sinful soul
From falling into hell.
He'll help you in the good times,
He'll help you in the bad,
He comforts when your feeling sad;
This thought makes me very glad!
God is with His children.
God is with His children
He knows them all by name,
And when it comes for them to die
Their souls He will reclaim.
Then as we stand before His throne
His face we all shall see;
And oh, what a glorious day
that shall be!
when God is with His Children.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for extra credit in my history class! This is also my first poem, so it might not be as great as other poems. Enjoy, and feel free to comment.

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on Aug. 6 2014 at 2:59 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is amazing. And so true. What a wonderful poem this is, your creation. Thank you for sharing this

lovetowrite2 said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:25 pm
lovetowrite2, .., Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If you're can't fall asleep at night that means you're awake in someone else's dream!!

great message, amazing song lyrics, be sure to right more, ur a amazing writer, hopefully god has a good plan for me too just like u, great job

on Sep. 12 2011 at 7:13 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is absoltely AMAZING!!!!!!  Hopefully, we will all go to heaven eventually so we can be with Him.  This has a great message and I hope everyone on TeenInk reads it!!!  I would love to give it 100 stars, but I can only give it 5!!!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 8:05 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

lol... hope to emila you sooner than soon!!!!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:24 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

YAY! :) Can't wait! lol

on Aug. 24 2010 at 5:21 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

ok ill shoot you an email!!

on Aug. 22 2010 at 4:33 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

oK, I know what you mean, well I have an email that I don't use a ton, it's monicay16@yahoo.com I'll be sure to look it up and tell you what I think! :) I love Psalms, and I also love the Book of James! :) as well as Prov. and yea you get the idea! haha My favorite Chapter of John is John14, it's sooo comforting! :D Ttyl God Bless!

on Aug. 22 2010 at 3:24 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

yea i do but id rather not put it up to where everyone who looks through your comments can see it... its not that i dont trust you cuz i completly do but its just that i have done that before and i and this ramdom person that i didnt know emilaing me... if u put yours ill emila you but if u dont want to you dont have to!

Hey, can u do ma a favor? O.K well u see my FAVORITE chapter of the bible is Psalm chapetr 40... all of it. I just wanted to  know if you would read it and tell me what you think. I wrote the whole thing on my mirror and i wanted to know what you hink of it!

Thanks God bless!!


Monica Y. said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:45 pm
hey, do you have an yahoo/gmail account so we can chat? You don't have to tell me what it is, I'll completly understand. :D

on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:40 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

so positive and sooo true a deffinate fave!!

Pillow BRONZE said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 9:55 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

I loved it! It's so true too! It really reminds me of everything we have as children of God. Thank you!

on Jan. 29 2010 at 7:47 pm
awesomeaugust GOLD, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground"
~Theordore Roosevelt

I loved how you were able to make it rhyme and flow nicley! It has a a very sing-song mood/tone to it. Keep writing!

on Jan. 18 2010 at 11:33 pm
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 29 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

So true (:

I love this. It's very positive & uplifting.

on Dec. 10 2009 at 8:02 pm
bumblebee0704, Romeoville, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's the climbing that makes the man.

wow that is so true and a great poem! i really loved it. It's kinda comforting to kno he is always there. thanks!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 5:01 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Oh My Gosh, this is so amazing. It made me want to turn to God in every little situation I face! Amazing.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 2:29 pm
ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
If life gives you fabric, make a clothing line.

Great! I love it!

on Nov. 12 2009 at 8:45 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks. :) Oh no prob. you are really good! God has a plan for you!

jddla said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 8:43 pm
Good Job! nice ryhme scheme!

;) thanx for the comment BTW(missing my love)

jessi GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 9:30 pm
jessi GOLD, Nunya, Florida
15 articles 4 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When injustice becomes law, rebellion becomes duty."

absolutely AMAZING! love it!!! totally made me feel happier, and great job on rhyming!

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:18 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thanks, that made my day! :)


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