You Take The Breath Right Out Of Me...

July 14, 2009
By LucyS BRONZE, Fort Campbell, Kentucky
LucyS BRONZE, Fort Campbell, Kentucky
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Breathe.

Remember to breathe.

Breathe the hollow remains of unspoken words.
Inhale the scent of sorrow and invisible hope.

Remember to breathe.

Pull the ear-splitting silence into your fragile body.
Reject the comfort, inhale the deep blue misery.

I can't breathe.

Draw my disappointment in through your unwilling mouth.
Forget the placidity of the past, absorb the harsh truth.

I forgot to breathe.



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Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2009 at 6:43 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Oh. Wow. This... is .... AMAZING. wow. is all i can say. You have touched my heart. Keep writing please. you are such a awesome writer. You write from the deepest part of your heart and i can see it. That is truly awesome.

SaraB. GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2009 at 11:44 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

I like how the stanzas make it choppier, but in a good way. Did you mean for it to be in like a breathing rhythm?, because that's the impression I got. Good work!


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