She Gave up Hope <3

March 1, 2009
One day there was
a girl, she was teased
for everything
cared about her,
she put on a smile
everyday, and everyone thought she had a great personality, she didn't care, but what they didn't realize was, her smiale, fake, her personality, fake, she was fake but for a good reason, she had no friends and noone cared, and one day she came home walked to her room, sat at her desk took out a metal piece and said
"I can't do this anymore."

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SaraB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2009 at 12:18 am
Wow, that was really powerful. Not to be critical, but no one is two words, not a compound. I used the same picture for my poem Conversations With No One. Ha, that's odd, it has no one in. Oh well, I used to spell it like that too. :)
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