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Consciousness

July 22, 2009
By StormPraiser91 SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
StormPraiser91 SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Honey child. You need to build a bridge, on top of your head, and get over yourself!" -my best friend Andiel


When foggy quiet evenings fall
When Heaven hovers low
And almost imperceptibly
My heart beats soft and slow

When my world slows to imitate
The sleepy summer rain
In tender sacred harmony
With all that God has made

I cannot see or hear you now
Or touch your fingertips
But even when the sky is dark
I know the sun exists

Invisible, intangible
And precious as the air
Familiar as the rising sun
I breathe, and you are there


The author's comments:
Even at night, I know the sun is still out there somewhere
And even when we're apart,
I know you're out there somewhere too.

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on Aug. 3 2009 at 12:56 am
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I love this poem!!! Great Job!!!!!!! 5 stars to you I give! Lol