July 22, 2009
By Tizzibella BRONZE, Carpentersville IL, Illinois
Tizzibella BRONZE, Carpentersville IL, Illinois
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Such a pretty teenage girl
but nobody knows
how she truly feels
cuz it never shows

That pretty fake smile
she wears everyday
deep down shes wishing
"God, please take me away"

Jewelry and sleeves
to hide her arms
wristbands and hoodies
and bracelets with charms

The burn of the blade
so pleasurable when deep
she starts to think
and begins to weep

Shes gone too far
a pretty white light
and that's when she left up
that fateful night.

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Angelalala said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 8:38 pm
Angelalala, Gilbert, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
I won't be a rock star. I will be a legend.
-Freddie Mercury

Wow that was really really amazing. I am very impressed with that poem. I love it so much!

liljay19 said...
on Jul. 31 2009 at 3:10 am
this poem is really good and touches my heart in a way i dont wanna remeber though, but poems are supose to touch your inner self.

aunt lizzy said...
on Jul. 28 2009 at 3:06 am
Wow that was a very good poem. sometimes when we write we are writing about our alter ego...it isn't you that you that you wrote about is it? i love you!!

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