Without an Evil Hour

July 21, 2009
By AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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Sweet dogwoods lean against the hills
That turn the plains to flower.
And not in warm day or nightly chill
Have they seen an evil hour.

Tortured with love; sealed with a kiss,
The beautiful field grows.
But seek not time without bliss
As far as nature goes.

The friendly scent, though only subtle,
Is there, either way,
And the swallow, his song in rebuttal
Whilst last light kisses the day.

Stars twinkle and smile in the sky
So sweetly, but the sour?
Banished with a mournful cry
Without an evil hour.



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on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:56 pm
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

in case the last message doesnt work ok haha and ill make a forum

 


on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:55 pm
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

haha ok i guess we can do that but... ok i wil try and make one but here, my first name is ben, my last name is mili-tell-o. my email is my initials.my first name.my last name and i use gmail. the periods actualy in thos spots. give it a try... ill make a forum anyway

on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:14 am
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

ok thanks and which forum, i have a piece that i cant finish and i wouldn't mind some help with it, i will send you it through that i just thought emailing might be quicker and easier

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:59 am
AlexaClare BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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"You may not like me, but thats okay I like me."

Your welcome Aubrey :) 

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:58 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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thanks, Alexa!! :)

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:56 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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thanks!!! it means a lot! and i'd love to help u with ur writing!

oh and also, it just came to me... i was just thinking about nature and this is how i wrote it...

good luck with ur contest, and if u want to contact me u can comment below or post in a forum :)


on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:23 am
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

This is the second time i've read this piece, and i realy love the way you say all of your lines. you make things that are so simpl beautiful and poetic. i would love to know where you got the idea for your writing... email me or comment or whatev but you have crazy talent in poetry and it would be cool if you could help me with my newest piece for my nationals competition. thanks and keep writing

on Jul. 10 2010 at 4:14 pm
AlexaClare BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You may not like me, but thats okay I like me."

You write so well, the rhyming is very good and I could understand what you are trying to say. I love all your work, you are amazing at writing.  

-Alexa 


on Sep. 10 2009 at 8:12 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this one and '10 Perilpus Pimples' are two of my favorite things you wrote!

on Sep. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

wow this is beautiful. you feel like you're there.


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