5 Ways to Look At at a Tree

July 21, 2009
By tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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A beautiful creation that can be discussed in ten pages,
Or paper to be created and made into wages.

An object for not-so-smart birds to run into.
Trees can be really annoying, who knew?

A plant that creates air for me to breath.
More useful than a wreath.

Something to look at and say, "Please don't kill it!
There are living creatures within it!"

A creation to just look at.
One might even notice a cat.



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on Dec. 10 2009 at 9:01 pm
Allaboutlyf BRONZE, Hollis, New York
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whoa! for a poet that just became interested in poetry, you've got serious talent! I would luv to read more of your writing!

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on Sep. 27 2009 at 2:47 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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I liked how you described a tree. It is very interesting

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:07 pm
TheRightToDream SILVER, Fort Frances, Other
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May the cat be stuck? :P I find that my cat get stuck often. And then she howls.

It's almost...satirical. I think. But correct me if I'm wrong. I haven't used that word since...March. In English. :P

Joanna said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 11:48 pm
Joanna, St. Catharines, Other
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Ahaha, the cat was random. I like how you don't take yourself too seriously with these. This is a poem that you could have been so dramatic and descriptive, and, well, heavy with, but you kept it light. I like it.

on Aug. 6 2009 at 3:03 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i like how you wrote this one. i checked out your other work and this piece did not disappoint me...again well done! keep writing because you are very good :)

on Aug. 2 2009 at 5:36 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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haha, pretty cute. the cat at the end was kinda random but i like the rhyming (:




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