Winter Song This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.


(Freezing Pain of a Kiss)

Winter's song,
a spitefulmelody,
sung through frozen lips,
as you give me your cold kiss,
upon mylonely lips,
what have you done?
your cold lips,
they hurt me so,
Isometimes wish I never felt,
the freezing pain of your lips,
during ourwarm embrace.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Fantasywriter17 said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 7:48 pm
THIS IS VERY CUTE SUTTLE AND MEANINGFUL
 
TheSummoningFreak said...
May 25, 2010 at 2:06 pm
i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
EmbraceURawesomeness replied...
May 20, 2013 at 9:53 pm
this is really awesome! can I give you one little criticism though? I think that after "Upon my lonely lips" your poem gets repetitive. Because it has so few verses, each line has to add something new. You know?  but still, so great
 
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