Winter Song MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

(Freezing Pain of a Kiss)

Winter's song,
a spitefulmelody,
sung through frozen lips,
as you give me your cold kiss,
upon mylonely lips,
what have you done?
your cold lips,
they hurt me so,
Isometimes wish I never felt,
the freezing pain of your lips,
during ourwarm embrace.






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on May. 20 2013 at 9:53 pm
Wondering_About_Infinity SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm nobody! Who are you?" -Emily Dickinson

this is really awesome! can I give you one little criticism though? I think that after "Upon my lonely lips" your poem gets repetitive. Because it has so few verses, each line has to add something new. You know?  but still, so great

on Jul. 3 2010 at 7:48 pm
FantasyWriter17, Rialto, California
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Favorite Quote:
TO THE WORLD U MAY BE ONE PERSON BUT TO ONE PERSON U MAY BE THE WORLD!:)

THIS IS VERY CUTE SUTTLE AND MEANINGFUL

on May. 25 2010 at 2:06 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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