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The Way I Feel, The Way You Don't Care

July 14, 2009
By Nikita Ortwein SILVER, Royal Oak, Michigan
Nikita Ortwein SILVER, Royal Oak, Michigan
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i take it i'm sick
my tummy hurts like hell
i taste blood
i feel hunger
but i cant eat or drink to satisfy

all my symptoms began when i said
those fatal words
i want u back
and its only been a couple hours
plz dont take this at weekness
dont take pity upon me
i dont need or want it

just turn ur face
let me cry in peace


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on Jul. 21 2009 at 8:31 pm
jay_jayy:D GOLD, Trussville, Alabama
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I don't understand why people don't try to use correct grammar in their writing. Unless you're texting, emailing, or IMing, 'plz try not 2 typ lik diz'. It's hard to read and annoying.