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Love Games, Love Games
Stupid Cupid
You and Me?
Meant to be?

You understand me
You are so much like me
Can't you see?
Why does everyone think you're not?
Well I know

I'm not looking for a stud
A stick in the mud or not
You could be mine
I don't want to deal with this
Heart, Lead me in the right direction





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tor10jax said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 8:02 pm
I've looked through a bunch of your poems. It seems to me like you have a lot of different ideas so you write them down but don't go into them enough because you have another idea you want to write before you forget it. You could do so much more with each of these poems. Please go back to some of them and work on them more.
Keep writing!
 
XOLyssamarieXD replied...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 3:40 pm
Thanks for such positive feedbacks. My poems are suppose to leave you thinking and I don't think they should completley explain the topic at hand. If that's not what you are really getting at then please help me by telling me what i should do better. You can email if you like, it might be easier (Frog_lover2011@yahoo.com)
 
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