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July 13, 2009
By XOLyssamarieXD PLATINUM, Bellingham, Massachusetts
XOLyssamarieXD PLATINUM, Bellingham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Be not deceived if I have veiled my look I turn the trouble of my countenance merely upon myself"


Love Games, Love Games
Stupid Cupid
You and Me?
Meant to be?

You understand me
You are so much like me
Can't you see?
Why does everyone think you're not?
Well I know

I'm not looking for a stud
A stick in the mud or not
You could be mine
I don't want to deal with this
Heart, Lead me in the right direction


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on Sep. 8 2009 at 3:40 pm
XOLyssamarieXD PLATINUM, Bellingham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Be not deceived if I have veiled my look I turn the trouble of my countenance merely upon myself"

Thanks for such positive feedbacks. My poems are suppose to leave you thinking and I don't think they should completley explain the topic at hand. If that's not what you are really getting at then please help me by telling me what i should do better. You can email if you like, it might be easier (Frog_lover2011@yahoo.com)

tor10jax GOLD said...
on Sep. 1 2009 at 8:02 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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I've looked through a bunch of your poems. It seems to me like you have a lot of different ideas so you write them down but don't go into them enough because you have another idea you want to write before you forget it. You could do so much more with each of these poems. Please go back to some of them and work on them more.

Keep writing!


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