Somewhere else

July 13, 2009
By Angel4u SILVER, Woodbridge, Virginia
Angel4u SILVER, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Cowards Die Many Times Before Their Death ; But The Valiants Never Taste of Death but Once".
"One's Heart Can Be Broken,but One's Faith Can Recover".
"Well Done Is Better Than Well Said".


I walked, but felt no warmth
I jumped, but saw no growth
I looked and looked again, but only found myself.
I've lived everyday like the last, but I wanted to remember my past.
I've made mistakes for so long, but never said I was wrong.


The author's comments:
The message of the poem is that you don't always feel or get what you want.

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on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job!!! i 100% understand the message. you put it into such a rhythmic poem it is very fun, easy and powerful to read :) bravo! keep writing, and also check out some of my work, i would love the comments!




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