This Confidence

July 13, 2009
By montreal132 SILVER, Rush, New York
montreal132 SILVER, Rush, New York
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I never knew simply sitting alone
could bring such satisfaction
I dont trust my new found confidence
as far as I can throw it
However
who knows if I can throw it
or no
Maybe in some universe where feelings have
physical weight
Canyouactuallythrowafeelingthere
Or just nowhere
Or am I thinking too far into this again
This feeling feels so odd to me
This change from constant melancholy
I dont know how
I dont know when
I started feeling
this way
again


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on Aug. 4 2009 at 7:16 pm
Olivia93 SILVER, Huntington Beach, California
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amazing piece, loved the ending :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 21 2009 at 3:14 pm
Wow, I really like this poem. You commented on some of my poems [Thanks by the way] so I thought I would read some of yours....I'm glad I did. Thanks again for all of your comments!

on Jul. 18 2009 at 8:48 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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wow, great poem! i esp. loved how there was a little rhyme in the end. gave your poem an extra boost (:


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