Still Waiting, Because It's Not You

July 12, 2009
By Raid2bcool GOLD, Visalia, California
Raid2bcool GOLD, Visalia, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People may not be able to get to the top because of who they are.... but they ARE able to do what IS at the top."

How could it be
That you say
I love you
But you go off
And do something
So cruel
I said it too
Did you even
Mean it
Or was it
Just something to say
To fill in the silence
To say goodbye
Without awkwardness
You said I was special
In fact
You said
I was the most
Prettiest thing
You'd ever seen
You looked in my eyes
And I looked
Into yours
And was thinking
This guy is different
But were you thinking
This girl is
And desperate
How could you do that to me
Did our relationship
Mean nothing
To you
I don't understand
Your feelings for me
Seemed so
But no
You go off
And diss me
I was worth
To you
And started talking
About another girl
I was so shocked
I didn't know
How or what
To feel
Are you worth
My tears
Should I even give you
A second chance
I thought
Everything was so real
I thought you were different
But it just goes to show
ALL guys
Are the same
All heartless
But now i know
That's one guy
That isn't
Going to slay the dragon
And save me from my tower
So I'll sit
And wait
For my prince charming
To come save me

The author's comments:
my friend had known this guy for about two months, and they started dating, and in only like 4 days they were saying i love you and sucking each other's faces, me and my boyfriend have been going out for 4 months and we barely even started doing those things, and i knew deep down inside that thier relationship wasn't going to last... he just looked like one of those guys... but i didn't say anything... well they had already been going out for like two weeks and he was avoiding her and he posted a video totally dissing her and at the end he says "It's over babe!" so i wrote this poem to how i would have felt if i was put in that situation by using what she's told me

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Duckie430 said...
on Jul. 17 2009 at 11:04 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

really good. your emotions come across well.

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